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MY UTOPIA
Peer-checking and
editing
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Lesson Objectives:
Peer check a friend’s first
draft…CAREFULLY
Edit your first draft as per
feedback & corrections
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AND, BUT, BECAUSE, OR,
SO
In formal,
academic
writing….
You generally
should not
start
sentences with
AND, BUT,
BECAUSE, OR,
SO
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AND, BUT, BECAUSE, OR,
SO
WHY?
It’s not always wrong, but until
you master the English language,
it’s hard to decide when it is
appropriate to use at the
beginning of a sentence…so best
to avoid for now
Even when used correctly, it can
make your writing sound more
informal (some even say rude!)
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AND, BUT, BECAUSE, OR,
SO
Please correct….
Everyone
needs a dog.
Because
perfect
countries need
perfect
animals.
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AND, BUT, BECAUSE, OR,
SO
Please correct….
So to keep my
country
beautiful,
citizens should
throw away
their trash.
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Peer
check!!!
Directions:
1) Ask a friend to CAREFULLY peer check your
essay.
2) Highlight the things your partner is looking
for to make the process easier.
3) Use a pen of a different colour to illustrate
the evidence of editing
4) Please, be a good critical friend for
your partner to help him/her identify
areas for improvement!!!
***If the person did not meet a piece of
criteria, note WHY in the spaces left for you.
IT WILL HELP YOUR FRIEND A LOT!!!
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Example:
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Let’s Reflect & Discuss
Show/explain your flag
or bank note to a friend
& explain how it
represents your
country.
Ask your friend a
thoughtful question
about the drawing or
idea. When asked,
reflect, then answer.
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